交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应更简洁且结构清晰，避免句子过长且不完整。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my city. However, sometimes I find the crossing time too short, which makes it difficult for me to cross safely.

建議: 回答应更完整，注意语法和表达的准确性。可以先明确表达愿望，然后用原因支持，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I would like the green light duration to be longer because I walk slowly, especially during busy times, which makes crossing the street stressful.

× Yes, there are a variety of crosswalks in the city where I live and sometimes I will get stuck because the crosswalks are too long for me to cross them and the green lights are.

✓ Yes, there are a variety of crosswalks in the city where I live, and sometimes I get stuck because the crosswalks are too long for me to cross, and the green lights are short.

原句结构混乱，缺少必要的连接词和完整表达，导致句意不清。应使用逗号和连词分隔句子，使表达更清晰。并补充完整“the green lights are short”以表达完整意思。

× I really hope that the green light duration could be longer because I'm quite slow for especially in busy times.

✓ I really hope that the green light duration could be longer because I'm quite slow, especially in busy times.

“slow for especially”中“for”使用错误，应去掉“for”，直接使用“especially”引导状语，表达更自然。