交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "go go cross" ve "cross folk" ifadeleri doğal değil ve anlamı zorlaştırıyor. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz dağınık ve tekrarlar içeriyor. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için, doğrudan soruya yanıt verip, nedenlerini açık ve net bir şekilde belirtmelisiniz.

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my area because it is a busy town. People need safe places to cross the streets, so the city has built plenty of them.

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları mevcut. "there are something to I want to change" ifadesi yanlış ve cümle yapısı karışık. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde bağlaç kullanımı eksik, bu da akıcılığı azaltıyor. Daha net ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi daha etkili ifade edebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I would like to improve the bus service in my area. For example, there should be more buses, and they should operate until midnight because currently, the service stops at 10 PM, which is inconvenient for many people.

× Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around to my place because my hometown is quite crowded.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around my place because my hometown is quite crowded.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'around'. The correct phrase is 'around my place' without 'to'. This is a prepositional error affecting the plural noun phrase.

× That's why people need to go go cross.

✓ That's why people need to go across.

The phrase 'go go cross' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'go across' to indicate crossing. The repetition 'go go' is a mistake, and 'cross' should be used as a preposition or adverb, not a noun here.

× They need cross folk.

✓ They need crosswalks.

The phrase 'cross folk' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'crosswalks', which are pedestrian crossings. 'Folk' refers to people, which is not appropriate here.

× Yes, there are something to I want to change about traffic.

✓ Yes, there is something I want to change about traffic.

The phrase 'there are something' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and should be used with 'there is'. Also, 'to I want' is incorrect; it should be 'I want'. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue.

× The buses should be more and they should be available until midnight because it's over when it's 10:00 PM.

✓ There should be more buses and they should be available until midnight because service ends at 10:00 PM.

The phrase 'The buses should be more' is incorrect; 'more buses' is the correct form. Also, 'it's over' is vague; 'service ends' is clearer. This involves modal verb usage and sentence structure.

× We need them more available.

✓ We need them to be more available.

The phrase 'more available' needs the infinitive form 'to be' to be grammatically correct. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb forms.