交通— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
考生
I live in a family oriented neighborhood, so yes, I would say there are a lot of crosswalks around here, but still people manage to grow through just whenever they want and it's really disturbing for the drivers.
考官
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
考生
Not a lot to change here because I think there are a lot of crosswalks in different places, so it's really comfortable to walk through this neighborhood. But still there are some places maybe where I want to add a few.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
分數: 65.0建議: Вашу відповідь слід зробити більш природною та чіткою. Уникайте помилок, таких як "grow through" замість "go through". Також краще розділити думки на дві речення, використовуючи зв'язки для логічності. Наприклад, спочатку підтвердьте наявність пішохідних переходів, а потім додайте проблему з пішоходами, які не дотримуються правил.
範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my family-oriented neighborhood. However, some people cross the street carelessly, which can be disturbing for drivers.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
分數: 70.0建議: Ваша відповідь є зрозумілою, але можна зробити її більш структурованою і природною. Використовуйте зв'язки, щоб логічно поєднати думки, і уникайте невизначених фраз, таких як "maybe". Краще чітко вказати, де саме ви хотіли б додати пішохідні переходи.
範例: I think the traffic is generally good because there are many crosswalks, which makes walking comfortable. However, I would like to add a few more crosswalks near busy intersections to improve safety.
文法
× people manage to grow through just whenever they want
✓ people manage to cross whenever they want
The phrase 'grow through' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'cross' when referring to moving across a street or crosswalk. Using the correct verb improves clarity and accuracy.
× there are a lot of crosswalks in different places
✓ there are a lot of crosswalks in different places
This sentence is correct as it stands; no correction needed.
× But still there are some places maybe where I want to add a few.
✓ But there are still some places where I would like to add a few.
The original sentence has awkward word order and misplaced adverbs. Rearranging the sentence improves clarity and naturalness. 'Maybe' is better omitted or repositioned, and 'would like' is more polite and appropriate for expressing desire.
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