交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors which make it difficult to understand. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific details using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, there are not many crosswalks in my small town. Because of this, people often find it difficult to cross the streets safely, especially during busy hours. Therefore, I believe the local authorities should build more crosswalks to improve pedestrian safety.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to make your answer coherent. Also, complete your sentences fully.

範例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic system in my town because it is very poor. There are not enough police officers to control the traffic, so during rush hours, traffic jams are very common. Therefore, increasing the number of traffic police could help manage the situation better.

× I live in a small town where are not so many pros worker so so the people of the cities are suffering a lot, especially in the busy hour.

✓ I live in a small town where there are not so many professional workers, so the people of the cities are suffering a lot, especially during the busy hour.

The phrase 'are not so many pros worker' has a singular/plural mismatch and incorrect word choice. 'Pros worker' should be 'professional workers' to correctly indicate plural and proper noun usage. Also, 'where are not' is incorrect; it should be 'where there are not' to properly use 'there be' structure.

× I live in a small town where are not so many pros worker so so the people of the cities are suffering a lot, especially in the busy hour.

✓ I live in a small town where there are not so many professional workers, so the people of the cities are suffering a lot, especially during the busy hour.

The sentence lacks the word 'there' in the 'there be' construction, which is necessary to indicate existence. Correct form is 'there are not' instead of 'are not'.

× So I think the authority should arrange more crosswalker in the city.

✓ So I think the authority should arrange more crosswalks in the city.

The word 'crosswalker' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'crosswalks' referring to pedestrian crossings.

× There are not sufficient police officer, they cannot control the traffic.

✓ There are not sufficient police officers; they cannot control the traffic.

'Police officer' should be plural 'police officers' to agree with 'are not sufficient' which indicates plural.

× That's why in the rush period the traffic system is.

✓ That's why the traffic system is poor during the rush period.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate after 'is'. The correction completes the sentence by adding 'poor' and rearranging for clarity.