交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a clear, full sentence in response to the question and add a short specific detail. Use one or two linking words if you add information. Avoid repeating informal fillers like “yup” three times.

範例: Yes, there are several crosswalks near where I live, especially around the main shopping street. For example, there are two pedestrian crossings by the supermarket and one at the school entrance, which makes it safer for children.

建議: Start with a concise topic sentence answering the question, then explain one or two specific changes you would make and why, using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Check grammar (subject–verb agreement and word choice) and avoid absolute statements like “cut all of traffic.”

範例: Yes, I would like to reduce traffic congestion in my area by improving public transport and adding bike lanes. For example, if there were more frequent buses and dedicated cycle paths, fewer people would drive, so traffic and stress on the roads would decrease.

× Yup, Yup, Yup.

✓ Yup, yup, yup.

This utterance is an informal interjection rather than a grammatical sentence; however, the capitalization is inconsistent. Use consistent lowercase for repeated informal responses. No grammatical pronoun replacement needed, but maintain consistent style: 'Yup, yup, yup.' Note: This entry is minor and stylistic rather than a core grammar rule.

× Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?

✓ Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?

The only problem is the missing space between 'about' and 'the', which merges words. The structure 'Is there anything ...' correctly uses the 'there be' construct for asking about existence or possibility. Ensure proper spacing: 'about the traffic'. Suggestion: Proofread to avoid joining words together.

× Absolutely, I would like to cut all of traffic if I had a chance because traffic make me very angry while I'm driving.

✓ Absolutely, I would like to cut all of the traffic if I had a chance because traffic makes me very angry while I'm driving.

Two issues: 'would like' + conditional 'if I had a chance' is acceptable, but the noun phrase needs the definite article 'the' before 'traffic' when referring to specific traffic in the area. Also, 'traffic make' is subject-verb disagreement: 'traffic' is a singular uncountable noun and requires the third-person singular verb form 'makes'. Suggestion: Use 'the traffic' for specific reference and 'makes' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× People are very rude and are responsible while they're driving.

✓ People are very rude and irresponsible while they're driving.

The sentence intends to contrast 'rude' and the negative of 'responsible'. Using 'are responsible' contradicts 'very rude' and likely is a mistake. The correct adjective is 'irresponsible' rather than 'are responsible'. Also, combining 'are' with two adjectives is fine ('are rude and irresponsible'), but avoid a verb repeated unnecessarily. Suggestion: Use parallel adjectives and the correct negative form: 'rude and irresponsible'.