购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and clear, but it can be more concise and structured. Avoid redundancy like "I always make it a point" twice and clarify your ideas with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relieve stress. Whenever I feel overwhelmed, I go out to buy beautiful clothes that I like, which cheers me up.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts, avoid repeating words, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices because, as a parent, I manage the household budget. Therefore, I make sure to buy items that are affordable and within our financial limits.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and fragmented. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same phrases.

範例: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices because I have to stick to a budget. Although I want to buy many things, I can only choose affordable items that fit within my financial limits.

建議: Your answer shows your opinion but is incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences, use linking words, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your view.

範例: I disagree because expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, you pay more for the brand name rather than quality. In fact, many affordable items offer good value and performance.

× I I am the one who budgeting the money in the house so I always make it a point that I buy.

✓ I am the one who is budgeting the money in the house so I always make it a point that I buy.

The verb 'budgeting' needs the auxiliary verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Without 'is', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Use 'is budgeting' to indicate the ongoing action.

× Stuff that is within our budget, although when I was.

✓ Stuff that is within our budget, although when I was.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear, but 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and correctly used with 'is'. No plural correction needed here. However, the sentence is incomplete and should be completed for clarity.

× I always choose affordable stuff. That is within our budget.

✓ I always choose affordable stuff that is within our budget.

The period between the two clauses creates a sentence fragment. Combining them with a relative pronoun 'that' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Of course I have things that I wanted to buy, but it's just not within our budget.

✓ Of course I have things that I want to buy, but they're just not within our budget.

The verb tense should be present 'want' to match the current desire. Also, 'things' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and 'are' contracted as 'they're'.

× So it that's why it's very difficult for me to choose.

✓ So that's why it's very difficult for me to choose.

The phrase 'it that's' is redundant and incorrect. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× Sometimes you're just paying for the brand name.

✓ Sometimes you are just paying for the brand name.

Contraction 'you're' is acceptable in spoken English, but for clarity and formality, 'you are' is preferred. However, this is not a strict error.

× Actually, there are a lot of affordable items that is or that has the.

✓ Actually, there are a lot of affordable items that are or that have the.

'Items' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' or 'have' to agree in number. The sentence is incomplete and should be finished for clarity.