购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e boro sentence use korun, jate answer ta natural ebong sohoje bujha jai. Apnar answer e kichu word vul ache, ar sentence structure o clear na. Apni chesta korun prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu specific details add korun. Example: "Yes, I like shopping because I enjoy trying different outfits, shoes, perfumes, and accessories."

範例: Yes, I like shopping because I enjoy trying different outfits, shoes, perfumes, and accessories. It helps me find new styles that suit me well.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache, ar sentence gulo incomplete. Apni clear vabe bolun je apni price compare koren kina, ar karon ta specific bhabe janan. Linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy. Example: "No, I don't compare prices because I always prefer quality over price, even if the product is a bit expensive."

範例: No, I don't compare prices because I always prefer quality over price, even if the product is a bit expensive. For me, a colorful and well-made product is more important than saving money.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo clear na. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details add korun. Linking words use korun jate answer ta fluent hoy. Example: "No, it is not difficult for me to make choices because I usually plan what I want to buy before shopping."

範例: No, it is not difficult for me to make choices because I usually plan what I want to buy before shopping. This helps me avoid confusion and save time.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu word vul ache ar sentence structure o confusing. Apni clear vabe bolun apnar opinion, ar supporting reason din. Linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy. Example: "Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because companies put more effort into making them."

範例: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because companies put more effort into making them, ensuring higher quality and durability compared to cheaper products.

× Yes, I just don't like shopping but also I love. Shopping.

✓ Yes, I not only like shopping but also love it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'just don't like shopping but also I love' which is confusing and grammatically incorrect. The correct conjunction structure is 'not only... but also...' to express two positive ideas. Also, 'love. Shopping.' is fragmented and should be combined properly.

× Because I want to. Try all kinds of outfits, shoes and perfumes and xcessories.

✓ Because I want to try all kinds of outfits, shoes, perfumes, and accessories.

The original sentence is fragmented and has spelling errors ('xcessories'). The sentence should be combined into one complete sentence with correct spelling and punctuation.

× Then newly came.

✓ Then new items arrive.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It seems to refer to new items arriving recently. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and is grammatically correct.

× No, not at all. I don't compare prices when I go for the shopping because I always prefer a prize.

✓ No, not at all. I don't compare prices when I go shopping because I always prefer quality.

The original sentence misuses 'a prize' instead of 'quality' and uses 'for the shopping' which is incorrect. 'Go shopping' is the correct phrase, and 'prefer quality' fits the context better.

× Sorry, I don't prefer price.

✓ Sorry, I don't prefer price.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I don't prefer price' or better 'I don't prioritize price.' However, since the previous sentence already covers this, it can be omitted or corrected for clarity.

× I always prefer quality over price if they think.

✓ I always prefer quality over price even if it is a bit expensive.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'If they think' is misplaced and does not make sense here. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× Is little bit expensive, but The thing is very colorful product.

✓ It is a little bit expensive, but the product is very colorful.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect capitalization. 'Is little bit expensive' should be 'It is a little bit expensive.' Also, 'The thing is very colorful product' is incorrect; it should be 'the product is very colorful.'

× I will.

✓ I will buy it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'buy it' completes the thought.

× No, not at all. I am not that much choosy guy.

✓ No, not at all. I am not a very choosy guy.

The phrase 'that much choosy guy' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a very choosy guy.' Also, 'choosy' is an adjective and needs an article before 'guy.'

× Whenever I go for shopping, I I have.

✓ Whenever I go shopping, I have...

The sentence is incomplete and has repeated words. It should be completed or rephrased for clarity.

× I already have make plans what we like by what will I owned by.

✓ I already make plans about what I like and what I will own.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and clearer structure.

× That's why it's not difficult for me at all.

✓ That's why it's not difficult for me at all.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Yes, I pinged that expensive products are always better becauses the company or the organization who make the expensive product had.

✓ Yes, I think that expensive products are always better because the company or organization that makes the expensive product has.

The original sentence has spelling errors ('pinged' instead of 'think', 'becauses' instead of 'because') and incorrect verb forms ('who make' should be 'that makes', 'had' should be 'has'). The corrected sentence fixes these errors.

× Work hard on that but the cheaper ones has no heart shapes are working on them product they just make that not seriously just for money.

✓ They work hard on that, but the cheaper ones have no heart; the people working on those products just make them without seriousness, just for money.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect verb forms ('has' should be 'have'), missing punctuation, and unclear phrasing. The corrected sentence separates ideas properly and uses correct verb forms.