购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use more natural phrasing and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, avoid repeating 'shopping' too often and correct verb forms like 'It gives' instead of 'It's gives'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to discover new products and buy things I need. Additionally, shopping helps me relieve stress and boosts my mood, which benefits my mental health.

建議: Focus on clearer sentence structure and correct word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points with specific examples.

範例: Yes, I usually compare prices because branded products tend to be expensive. Therefore, I want to make sure I get good value for my money. Moreover, in my country, the price difference between branded and regular products is not very large.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to contrast ideas and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, be specific about your experience to enrich your answer.

範例: Generally, it is not difficult for me to make choices because I shop with my mother or best friend and ask for their opinions. However, when I shop alone, I find it harder to decide, especially when I have to choose between two similar items.

建議: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid confusing phrases and provide clear reasons or examples. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

範例: No, I don't believe expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. In my country, Iran, there is often little difference in quality between expensive and cheaper items like clothes or food. Therefore, buying cheaper products can be a smart choice and not a waste of money.

× It's gives a chance to explore new product and something that you want to buy.

✓ It gives a chance to explore new products and something that you want to buy.

The verb 'gives' should be used with the singular subject 'It'. 'It's' is a contraction of 'It is' which is incorrect here. Also, 'product' should be plural 'products' to match the context of exploring multiple items.

× It's gives a chance to explore new product and something that you want to buy.

✓ It gives a chance to explore new products and something that you want to buy.

The noun 'product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to multiple items you can explore while shopping.

× I think shopping can control your stress and improve your mood so can be very useful for your mental health actually.

✓ I think shopping can control your stress and improve your mood, so it can be very useful for your mental health actually.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'can be'. Adding 'it' clarifies the subject and improves sentence structure.

× Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop because branded product tend to be acquitted an expensive, so I want to ensure that I get the value for money because I can save more.

✓ Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop because branded products tend to be quite expensive, so I want to ensure that I get value for money because I can save more.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'branded products'. 'Tend' agrees with plural subject. 'Acquitted' is incorrect; the correct word is 'quite'. Also, 'value for money' does not need 'the'.

× And in my country there are not very big different between branded product or regular project.

✓ And in my country, there is not a very big difference between branded products and regular products.

'Different' should be 'difference' as a noun. 'Product' should be plural 'products'. 'Project' is incorrect; it should be 'products'. Also, 'there is' is used for singular 'difference'. 'Between' pairs with 'and' not 'or'.

× Generally no, because I go shop with my mother or my best friend so I can ask their opinion about my choice.

✓ Generally no, because I go shopping with my mother or my best friend so I can ask their opinions about my choices.

'Go shop' should be 'go shopping' as the verb form. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because it refers to multiple people. 'Choice' should be plural 'choices' to match context.

× So it's not difficult but sell them when I. Go shop alone.

✓ So it's not difficult, but it is difficult when I go shopping alone.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Sell them' is incorrect; likely intended 'same' or 'different'. Corrected to express difficulty when shopping alone clearly.

× It's a difficult to choose because I stay between two items.

✓ It's difficult to choose because I hesitate between two items.

'A difficult' is incorrect; 'difficult' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Stay between' is incorrect; 'hesitate between' or 'am torn between' is appropriate.

× No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper one.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

'One' should be plural 'ones' to match plural 'products'.

× Actually in my country Iran up there are not difference between cheaper tanks or expensive ones like clothes or actually foods or something like that.

✓ Actually, in my country Iran, there is no difference between cheaper things or expensive ones like clothes or actually food or something like that.

'Not difference' should be 'no difference'. 'Tanks' is incorrect; likely meant 'things'. 'Foods' is usually uncountable; 'food' is correct.

× So I think when you buy cheaper you wasting your money.

✓ So I think when you buy cheaper, you are wasting your money.

The verb 'are' is missing before 'wasting'. Also, 'buy cheaper' is informal; better to say 'buy cheaper products' or 'buy cheap items'.