购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e beshi clear and direct hote paren. Prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details din. Sentence gulo natural ebong sohoje bujha jete hobe. Redundancy komate hobe.

範例: Yes, I like shopping but not very often because I am not a shopaholic. I usually shop occasionally when I need something. I don't enjoy going shopping every day as it can be tiring.

建議: Apnar answer e grammar and sentence structure improve korte hobe. Linking words use kore answer ke logical banan. Specific details dite paren, jemon online price check kora, budget er karone price compare kora.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices before shopping. First, I check online to see if the product is available at a lower price. Then, I visit the store to bargain because as a student, I have a limited budget and cannot spend too much.

建議: Apnar answer e sentence gulo aro fluent korte hobe. Linking words use korun jate answer ta smooth hoy. Specific example dite paren jemon list banano process.

範例: No, it is not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I always make a list beforehand. This helps me know exactly what I need to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建議: Apnar answer e grammar and coherence improve korte hobe. Linking words use kore opinion and example clearly express korun. Specific comparison diye answer ke strong korun.

範例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, I once bought an expensive beauty blender that did not work as well as a cheaper one I already had at home. Therefore, price does not always guarantee quality.

× Will I actually like?

✓ Do I actually like?

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Will' to ask about a present preference. 'Will' is a modal verb used for future tense or willingness, but here the question is about a current liking, so 'Do' is the correct auxiliary verb to use.

× Do shopping but not always or I'm not shopaholic.

✓ I do shopping but not always, and I'm not a shopaholic.

The phrase 'Do shopping' is acceptable but the sentence structure is incorrect and incomplete. Also, 'shopaholic' needs an article 'a' before it. The sentence is corrected to be grammatically coherent and clear.

× I do shopping.

✓ I go shopping.

While 'do shopping' is understandable, the more natural and grammatically correct expression is 'go shopping' when referring to the activity.

× Most of the time, eventually.

✓ Most of the time, occasionally.

'Eventually' means 'in the end' or 'finally', which does not fit the context. 'Occasionally' means 'sometimes', which fits better with 'most of the time' to express frequency.

× Yes, whenever I do are go for shopping, I every time I compares the prices I first I check online if it's available in online I checked there and then I go for shopping and bargaining her because I'm as I'm a student so I have.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping, I always compare the prices. First, I check online if it's available there, then I go shopping and bargain because, as a student, I have limited money.

The original sentence has multiple errors: incorrect verb forms ('do are go'), subject-verb agreement ('compares'), incorrect prepositions ('in online'), and awkward phrasing. The correction fixes verb forms, prepositions, and sentence structure for clarity and correctness.

× Unlimited money.

✓ Limited money.

'Unlimited money' contradicts the context where the student cannot spend freely. The correct quantifier is 'limited' to express the restriction on money.

× No, actually not, because whenever I go for shopping I make a list and.

✓ No, actually not, because whenever I go shopping, I make a list and

'Go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion or proper punctuation.

× I know what should I buy and shouldn't, so it's not very difficult for me to shopping.

✓ I know what I should buy and what I shouldn't, so it's not very difficult for me to shop.

The sentence has incorrect word order in the embedded question ('what should I buy') and incorrect verb form ('to shopping'). The correction fixes word order and uses the correct infinitive verb form 'to shop'.

× No, I don't think expensive product are always better because last time I bought a beauty blender.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better because last time I bought a beauty blender.

The noun 'product' should be plural 'products' to agree with the plural verb 'are' and the general statement about products.

× Which is very high price but it is not that good.

✓ Which is very expensive but it is not that good.

'High price' is a noun phrase and does not fit here as an adjective. The correct adjective to describe the product is 'expensive'.

× What I have home which is cheaper than this.

✓ The one I have at home is cheaper than this.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a proper subject and verb. The correction provides a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× So I don't think every time expensive products are good.

✓ So I don't think expensive products are always good.

'Every time' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb is 'always' to express frequency. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.