购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ 'allows' แทน 'allow' และ 'styles' แทน 'style' นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำและเพิ่มความชัดเจนในประโยค เช่น 'handmade crafts' แทน 'handmade car'

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot because it allows me to explore different styles and find unique items. For example, I like visiting local markets where I can discover handmade crafts and also support small businesses.

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีคำผิดและไม่ชัดเจน เช่น 'pies' ควรเป็น 'prices' และควรอธิบายเหตุผลให้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น ทำไมคุณถึงไม่เปรียบเทียบราคา

範例: No, I never compare prices because I usually ask my mom to buy things for me, so I trust her judgment.

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'make choices' แทน 'do choice' และ 'when I shop' แทน 'when I shopping' นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

範例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I usually compare the quality and the benefits of the items. For example, if I think I will only wear a shirt once, I won't buy it. However, if I believe I can wear it many times for different occasions, I will consider purchasing it.

建議: คำตอบของคุณไม่ตรงกับคำถามและไม่มีเนื้อหาที่ชัดเจน ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและอธิบายความคิดเห็นของคุณเกี่ยวกับสินค้าราคาสูงและราคาถูก

範例: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes cheaper items can have good quality too. It depends on the brand and materials used.

× Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot of because it allow me to explore different style and find unique items.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot because it allows me to explore different styles and find unique items.

The verb 'allow' should be in the third person singular form 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'style' should be plural 'styles' to match the context of exploring different types. 'A lot of' is incorrectly used here; 'a lot' is the correct phrase to express frequency or degree.

× For example, I like visiting local market where I can discover handmade car and also support small business.

✓ For example, I like visiting local markets where I can discover handmade crafts and also support small businesses.

The noun 'market' should be plural 'markets' to indicate general places. 'Car' is incorrect in this context; likely intended word is 'craft'. 'Small business' should be plural 'small businesses' to refer to multiple entities.

× No, I never compare pies because I always ask my mom to buy for me.

✓ No, I never compare prices because I always ask my mom to buy for me.

The word 'pies' is a misspelling or incorrect word; the correct word is 'prices' which fits the context of shopping and comparing costs.

× Hello, It's not difficult for me to do choice when I shopping because normally I compare the qualities and also the benefit that I'm going to use.

✓ It's not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because normally I compare the qualities and also the benefits that I'm going to use.

The phrase 'do choice' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make choices'. 'I shopping' should be 'I shop' to use the correct verb form. 'Benefit' should be plural 'benefits' to match the plural 'qualities' and the context.

× If I think that I going to wear that shirt or plan just one time, I will not buy it.

✓ If I think that I am going to wear that shirt or wear it just one time, I will not buy it.

The phrase 'I going to wear' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am'. Also, 'plan just one time' is unclear; it should be 'wear it just one time' to clarify the meaning.

× But if I think that I can use that shirt many, many times for many celebrations.

✓ But if I think that I can use that shirt many times for many celebrations, I will buy it.

The sentence is incomplete; it lacks a main clause. Adding 'I will buy it' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Very nice and beautiful.

✓ I think expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones; sometimes cheaper products can be very nice and beautiful.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject or verb. A complete sentence is needed to answer the question properly.