购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容もやや曖昧です。例えば「My wife's has a lot of knowledge」や「the time always high is very important time for me」は不自然です。より自然で明確な表現を心がけ、文法ミスを減らしましょう。

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I go with my wife. She knows a lot about various products, such as summer cooking utensils and clothes. Therefore, our shopping time, especially on weekends, is very valuable to me.

建議: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば「go to shopping」ではなく「go shopping」が正しいです。また、「search my favorite item by my instinct」は意味がやや不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を使いましょう。

範例: No, I usually don't compare prices because it can be complicated and time-consuming. Instead, I rely on my instincts to choose items I like, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

建議: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、頻繁な「uh」や文法の誤りが多く、流暢さに欠けます。例えば「which types is a much more better to buy」は不自然です。話す際は沈黙やつなぎ言葉を減らし、文法的に正しい表現を使いましょう。

範例: Yes, it is sometimes difficult for me to make choices. Fortunately, my wife often advises me on which products are better to buy and which ones are too expensive. Her advice is very helpful.

建議: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば「which is very cheap and good to have a for a long time」や「I don't watch the price of the goods not so often」は不自然です。より正確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. There are many affordable items that last a long time. Therefore, I don't pay much attention to prices because it often annoys me.

× Yes, I like to go to shopping, especially with my wife.

✓ Yes, I like to go shopping, especially with my wife.

The verb 'go' is followed by the base form of the verb or the '-ing' form without 'to'. The correct expression is 'go shopping', not 'go to shopping'.

× My wife's has a lot of knowledge about many goods, for example summer cooking items, clothes and adults.

✓ My wife has a lot of knowledge about many goods, for example summer cooking items, clothes and adult products.

The possessive form 'wife's' is incorrect here; it should be the subject 'wife'. Also, 'adults' is incorrect in this context; 'adult products' or 'items for adults' is more appropriate.

× So the time always high is very important time for me, especially in weekends.

✓ So that time is always very important for me, especially on weekends.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and article usage. 'The time always high' is incorrect; it should be 'that time is always'. Also, 'in weekends' should be 'on weekends'.

× No, I don't usually compare the prices of goods when I go to shopping because it is a very complicated and time consuming.

✓ No, I don't usually compare the prices of goods when I go shopping because it is very complicated and time-consuming.

Again, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'a very complicated' should be 'very complicated' without 'a' because 'complicated' is an adjective here.

× Instead, I always search my favorite item by my instinct.

✓ Instead, I always search for my favorite items by my instinct.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by the object. Also, 'item' should be plural 'items' to match the context.

× It's very enjoyable for me to spend with a lot of time.

✓ It's very enjoyable for me to spend a lot of time doing that.

The phrase 'spend with a lot of time' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'spend a lot of time' followed by an activity or gerund.

× Yes, I think so. And uh in many cases my wife always uh advises me to uh, which types, uh is a much more better to uh, buy and which is the worst high expenditure.

✓ Yes, I think so. In many cases, my wife always advises me which types are much better to buy and which have the worst high expenditure.

The sentence has unnecessary fillers and incorrect conjunctions. 'Much more better' is incorrect; 'much better' is correct. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary 'uh' and clarifying the clauses.

× Uh, it's very helpful for me.

✓ It's very helpful for me.

The filler 'Uh' is unnecessary and should be omitted for clarity.

× And no, I don't think so.

✓ No, I don't think so.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is often unnecessary and can be omitted for better style.

× And there are many goods which is very cheap and good to have a for a long time.

✓ And there are many goods which are very cheap and good to have for a long time.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'goods' (plural), so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'a for a long time' is incorrect; 'for a long time' is correct.

× So I don't watch the price of the goods not so often because it's always annoys me.

✓ So I don't watch the price of the goods very often because it always annoys me.

The phrase 'not so often' is awkward; 'very often' is more natural. Also, 'it's always annoys me' is incorrect; it should be 'it always annoys me'.