购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は少し冗長で文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、文を簡潔にし、文法を正しく使うことが重要です。また、具体的な理由や感情を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping during holidays because my wife likes to explore new clothes and foods. I find this process interesting, especially when visiting shopping malls, as I can discover new things.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I usually don't compare prices because I prefer to shop quickly without worrying too much about the cost.

建議: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が少し不自然です。主語と動詞の一致に注意し、理由を明確に述べることで、より自然な回答になります。

範例: Yes, I am often reluctant to make decisions when shopping. My wife usually takes the initiative because she knows more about the products and their prices.

建議: 回答が冗長で文法的な誤りが多いです。意見をはっきり述べ、具体的な理由や例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Many affordable items are useful and can improve my day. I also enjoy finding good quality products at reasonable prices.

× Yes, I always go shopping in every holidays because my wife likes to find a new clothes and food which is a very unusual and I like this process because I can find a new thing especially in the shopping mall.

✓ Yes, I always go shopping in every holiday because my wife likes to find new clothes and food which is very unusual and I like this process because I can find new things especially in the shopping mall.

'Holidays' should be singular 'holiday' after 'every' because 'every' is followed by a singular noun. 'A new clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'new clothes'. 'A new thing' should be plural 'new things' to match the context of finding multiple items.

× No, I don't usually watch the price of goods carefully when I go to shopping because I don't like to think deeply about about you and the price of that, so I always ignore that.

✓ No, I don't usually watch the price of goods carefully when I go shopping because I don't like to think deeply about it and the price, so I always ignore it.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The phrase 'think deeply about about you' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'think deeply about it'. Also, 'the price of that' is awkward; 'the price' suffices. Replacing 'that' with 'it' improves clarity.

× Yes, I always reluctant to make any decisions when I go shopping. Instead my wife always has a initiative to decide which things to buy and because she has a lot of knowledge about the goods and the price of that.

✓ Yes, I am always reluctant to make any decisions when I go shopping. Instead, my wife always takes the initiative to decide which things to buy because she has a lot of knowledge about the goods and their prices.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'Has a initiative' is incorrect; it should be 'takes the initiative'. The conjunction 'and because' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices. 'The price of that' should be 'their prices' to refer to multiple goods.

× No, I don't think so. There are many cheaper items which is very useful and can make my day like a dramatically and I think and the process of searching for the reasonable and very good goods is very enjoyable when I go shopping.

✓ No, I don't think so. There are many cheaper items which are very useful and can make my day dramatic, and I think the process of searching for reasonable and very good goods is very enjoyable when I go shopping.

'Items which is' is incorrect; 'items' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. 'Like a dramatically' is incorrect; 'dramatic' is the correct adjective to describe 'my day'. The phrase 'and I think and the process' is redundant; one 'and' should be removed. 'The reasonable and very good goods' should be 'reasonable and very good goods' without 'the'.