购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn để hiệu quả hơn. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như 'something that I need for a daily life' nên là 'something I need for daily life'.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because I'm interested in fashion. I usually go shopping two or three times a month, often with my mom or friends. We typically buy things I need for daily life, which makes the trips both fun and practical.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'compare price' nên là 'compare prices', 'limit purchase' nên là 'limited budget'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'while still something that I need' nên là 'while still buying what I need'.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I am a student with a limited budget. I look for affordable and package-friendly items that I can easily afford. This way, I can save money while still buying what I need.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'make joy' nên là 'make a choice', 'Brandon' có thể là 'brand' hoặc 'a gift'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I find it quite difficult to make a choice when I shop, especially if I need to buy a gift for someone special like my family or close friends. I want to choose something meaningful, but sometimes I'm not sure what they would like.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'expensive product and not always better' nên là 'expensive products are not always better'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi như 'meaningful and thoughts' nên là 'meaning and thought'.

範例: From my perspective, expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones. When I receive a gift, I value the meaning and thought behind it more than the price or quality.

× We usually buy something that I need for a daily life.

✓ We usually buy things that I need for daily life.

The word 'something' is singular but the context implies multiple items; also, 'a daily life' is incorrect because 'life' in this context is uncountable and does not need an article. Use plural 'things' and remove 'a'. (Lỗi số ít và số nhiều, danh từ không đếm được)

× I always compare price when I shop because I am a student and have a limit purchase.

✓ I always compare prices when I shop because I am a student and have a limited budget.

'Price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple prices are compared. 'Limit purchase' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'limited budget' to express financial constraints. (Lỗi số ít và số nhiều, sử dụng cụm từ không chính xác)

× I look for affordable and package friendly item that I can easily afford.

✓ I look for affordable and package-friendly items that I can easily afford.

'Item' should be plural 'items' because the speaker looks for multiple items. Also, 'package friendly' should be hyphenated as 'package-friendly' as a compound adjective. (Lỗi số ít và số nhiều, lỗi dùng tính từ kép)

× This can make me save a lot of money while still something that I need.

✓ This can help me save a lot of money while still getting something that I need.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'while still'. Adding 'getting' completes the meaning. (Lỗi cấu trúc câu)

× I certainly I find it's quite difficult to make joy when I shop, especially when I need to buy Brandon for a special person like my family or my close friends.

✓ I certainly find it's quite difficult to make a choice when I shop, especially when I need to buy a brand for a special person like my family or my close friends.

The phrase 'I certainly I find' is redundant; remove one 'I'. 'Make joy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a choice'. 'Brandon' is likely a misspelling of 'brand'. Also, 'a brand' needs an article. (Lỗi cấu trúc câu, lỗi dùng từ)

× I want to try something meaningful but sometimes I not sure about what they would like.

✓ I want to try something meaningful but sometimes I am not sure about what they would like.

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I' to form the correct present tense 'I am not sure'. (Lỗi sử dụng đại từ và động từ)

× For my perspective, I think expensive product and not always better than cheaper ones.

✓ From my perspective, I think expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'cheaper ones'. Also, 'and' should be 'are' to form the correct verb phrase. 'For my perspective' is better as 'From my perspective'. (Lỗi số ít và số nhiều, lỗi động từ, lỗi giới từ)

× When I will receive a gift, I value a meaningful and thoughts behind it more than a price and a quality.

✓ When I receive a gift, I value the meaning and thoughts behind it more than the price and the quality.

In time clauses with 'when', the present tense is used instead of future tense, so 'will receive' should be 'receive'. Also, 'a meaningful' is incorrect; it should be 'the meaning'. Articles before 'price' and 'quality' should be 'the' because they refer to specific concepts. (Lỗi thì tương lai, lỗi dùng mạo từ)