购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 구성하며, 불필요한 반복을 피하세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually go to large department stores with my boyfriend, and we shop a lot.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping with my boyfriend. We often visit large department stores and spend a lot of time browsing different items.

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I always compare prices because I want to find cheaper and better options.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to make sure I get the best deal and buy good quality products at a reasonable price.

建議: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 자신의 어려움을 명확하게 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 문장을 연습하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I find it difficult to make choices because I think a lot about which product is the best.'

範例: Yes, I often find it hard to decide what to buy because I consider many factors like price, quality, and usefulness.

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 자신의 의견을 분명히 하고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'No, I don't think expensive products are always better because some cheap products have good quality.'

範例: No, I don't believe expensive products are always better. For example, some affordable brands offer high-quality items that last long.

× I usually go to a huge department stores and we are. Shopping a lot.

✓ I usually go to a huge department store and we shop a lot.

'Department stores' is plural, but 'a huge' indicates singular. The noun should be singular to match the article 'a'. Also, 'we are. Shopping a lot.' is fragmented; it should be 'we shop a lot.' to form a complete sentence.

× I always compare prices when I shop, necessarily because I don't know why.

✓ I always compare prices when I shop, necessarily because I don't know why.

The adverb 'necessarily' is misplaced and makes the sentence unclear. It would be better omitted or repositioned, but since the instruction is to correct only listed grammar problems, no change is made here.

× I don't know there is maybe something more cheaper and better.

✓ I don't know if there is maybe something cheaper and better.

The phrase 'there is maybe' is awkward; 'if there is' is the correct conjunction to introduce the clause. Also, 'more cheaper' is incorrect; 'cheaper' alone suffices as it is a comparative adjective.

× I have a difficulty for making choices when I shop because I have many thinking about what is.

✓ I have difficulty making choices when I shop because I have many thoughts about what to choose.

The phrase 'a difficulty for making' is incorrect; 'difficulty making' is the correct form. Also, 'many thinking' is incorrect; 'many thoughts' is appropriate. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× There are so many products that GI that is cheap, but. It's good quality.

✓ There are so many products that are cheap but have good quality.

The phrase 'products that GI that is cheap' is unclear and contains errors. 'Products' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity.