购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, ví dụ như 'offer' nên là 'offers' và 'allow' nên là 'allows'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'you know'. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to explore new styles and buy groceries. Additionally, shopping is a relaxing way to socialize with others.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'allow' nên là 'allows'. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp lại cụm từ 'comparing prices' nhiều lần trong câu. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices because it helps me spend money wisely and avoid impulsive purchases. For example, I avoid buying expensive items when cheaper ones have the same quality.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a decisions' nên là 'a decision'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do tại sao việc lựa chọn lại khó khăn.

範例: Yes, it is difficult because there are many options available. I want to choose the most economical and suitable product, so I take time to compare before deciding.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'a cheap products' nên là 'cheap products', 'an expensive products' nên là 'expensive products', và câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác. Hãy thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý kiến của bạn.

範例: I think it depends. Sometimes cheap products can have the same quality as expensive ones, especially if they are from well-known brands. However, expensive products often use better materials, so they can be more durable.

× Ojas I really enjoy shopping because it offer me a chance to, you know, explore my new style or to fulfill my groceries in my home otherwise.

✓ Ojas I really enjoy shopping because it offers me a chance to, you know, explore my new style or to fulfill my groceries in my home otherwise.

The verb 'offer' should be in the third person singular form 'offers' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 2).

× So going shopping also allow me to socialize with other people which is very relaxed and a fun way for myself.

✓ So going shopping also allows me to socialize with other people which is very relaxing and a fun way for myself.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'going shopping'. Also, 'relaxed' should be 'relaxing' to correctly describe the experience. This involves subject-verb agreement (ID 2) and incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (ID 13).

× Oh of course, yes, comparing prices allow me to spend money more carefully and comparing prices may prevent me from spending impulsively.

✓ Oh of course, yes, comparing prices allows me to spend money more carefully and comparing prices may prevent me from spending impulsively.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'comparing prices'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 2).

× You know, buying something with the higher price but at the same quality is very annoying for me.

✓ You know, buying something with a higher price but the same quality is very annoying for me.

The phrase 'the higher price' should be 'a higher price' to indicate any higher price, and 'at the same quality' should be 'the same quality' without 'at'. This is an article error (ID 22) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Yes, because there are numerous choices in a store and I want to make a decisions which is the most careful and the most economical for myself.

✓ Yes, because there are numerous choices in a store and I want to make a decision which is the most careful and the most economical for myself.

The word 'decisions' should be singular 'decision' to agree with 'a'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I think it depends. If a cheap products umm with the purpose of advertising the derivations of a company, it will be the same quality as an expensive products.

✓ I think it depends. If cheap products, umm, are used with the purpose of advertising the derivations of a company, they will be the same quality as expensive products.

The phrase 'a cheap products' is incorrect because 'products' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'an expensive products' should be 'expensive products' without 'an'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and article error (ID 22).

× Otherwise I think expensive products because their material are very limited, so it's also reasonable.

✓ Otherwise, I think expensive products are better because their materials are very limited, so it's also reasonable.

The sentence lacks a verb after 'think expensive products'. Also, 'material' should be plural 'materials' to agree with 'their'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and singular and plural issue (ID 1).