购物— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like shopping?
考生
Yes, I do. I like shopping and I regard shopping not only the way to buy the things I need or the things I like, but also the way to take a rest and to have a relaxed mood. So I often go shopping with my friends or families.
考官
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
考生
Yes I do. I do to compare the prices when I shop. The reason is I want to buy the things that 'cause efforts affected rather than things, rather than to waste a large amount of money.
考官
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
考生
Note it isn't I'm not that kind of person. I have a clear target when I go to the shop and I just go to the shop to buy the finite exactly like and all neat and never be hesitated to buy things or other things.
考官
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
考生
Well, yes, I did. I believe that the expensive products are have their reasons to become to be priced at a high price so that we always have better quality than the cheaper ones. So I might.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like shopping?
分數: 70.0建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为复杂且有些重复，建议简化句子，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。
範例: Yes, I like shopping. I see it not only as a way to buy what I need but also as a chance to relax. I often go shopping with my friends or family.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用简单明了的句子表达比较价格的原因，并避免重复。
範例: Yes, I compare prices because I want to save money and avoid wasting it on expensive items.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
分數: 40.0建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，建议直接回答问题并用简单句子说明原因。
範例: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices. I usually know exactly what I want to buy before I go shopping.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
分數: 45.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，建议用简单句子表达观点并给出理由。
範例: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because they often have higher quality.
文法
× So I often go shopping with my friends or families.
✓ So I often go shopping with my friends or family.
“families”是复数形式，表示多个家庭，但这里应该指“家人”，用单数“family”更合适。
× I do to compare the prices when I shop.
✓ I do compare the prices when I shop.
“do to compare”结构不正确，助动词“do”后直接用动词原形“compare”，不加“to”。
× The reason is I want to buy the things that 'cause efforts affected rather than things, rather than to waste a large amount of money.
✓ The reason is I want to buy things that are worth the effort rather than waste a large amount of money.
原句结构混乱，表达不清。应简化句子，使用“things that are worth the effort”表达“值得努力的东西”，并去掉多余重复的“rather than things”。
× Note it isn't I'm not that kind of person.
✓ No, I'm not that kind of person.
“Note it isn't”不符合英语表达习惯，应改为“No”表示否定回答。
× I have a clear target when I go to the shop and I just go to the shop to buy the finite exactly like and all neat and never be hesitated to buy things or other things.
✓ I have a clear target when I go to the shop and I just go to buy exactly what I like, all neat, and never hesitate to buy things or other items.
原句中“finite”用法错误，应改为“exactly what I like”；“never be hesitated”语法错误，应改为“never hesitate”。
× Well, yes, I did.
✓ Well, yes, I do.
问题是现在时态，回答应使用现在时态“do”，而非过去时“did”。
× I believe that the expensive products are have their reasons to become to be priced at a high price so that we always have better quality than the cheaper ones.
✓ I believe that expensive products have their reasons to be priced high so that they always have better quality than cheaper ones.
“are have”是错误的动词搭配，应改为“have”；“to become to be priced”结构冗余，应简化为“to be priced”；“the cheaper ones”前的“the”可保留或省略，保持一致性。
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