购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to explore various products and take a break from my daily routine.

建議: 回答直接且内容具体，但语法有小错误（如主谓不一致），建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I always compare prices because, as a university student without a steady income, it is important for me to save money.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，使用连接词，并明确表达观点。

範例: Yes, sometimes it's hard to choose between expensive products with good quality and cheaper ones with poor design, so I have to make a wise decision.

建議: 回答内容具体，但有重复词汇和语法错误，建议避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意语法准确。

範例: No, expensive products are not always better because factors like taxes and import fees can increase prices, and sometimes local products are just as good.

× Yes, I always do that because I am a university student who don't have a steady income, so it's very important for me to compare price to save money.

✓ Yes, I always do that because I am a university student who doesn't have a steady income, so it's very important for me to compare prices to save money.

这里的主语是单数的"who"指代"a university student"，动词应该用第三人称单数形式"doesn't"，而不是"don't"。另外，"price"应使用复数形式"prices"，因为比较的是多个商品的价格。

× Yes, I always do that because I am a university student who don't have a steady income, so it's very important for me to compare price to save money.

✓ Yes, I always do that because I am a university student who doesn't have a steady income, so it's very important for me to compare prices to save money.

"price"应使用复数形式"prices"，因为比较的是多个商品的价格。

× Yes, it's very difficult for me sometimes when I meet some product with high price but good design and good quality.

✓ Yes, it's very difficult for me sometimes when I meet some products with high prices but good design and good quality.

"product"应使用复数形式"products"，因为这里指的是多个商品；"price"也应使用复数形式"prices"，表示多个商品的价格。

× But sometimes I will I have made some product which is very cheap but with bad design or low quality.

✓ But sometimes I have bought some products which are very cheap but have bad design or low quality.

原句结构混乱，"I will I have made"不符合语法，应改为"I have bought"表示过去经历；"product"改为复数"products"；谓语动词与主语一致，"which are"代替"which is"。

× So I have to make a wise choice between these two different.

✓ So I have to make a wise choice between these two different ones.

"different"是形容词，后面需要名词或代词来修饰，缺少名词或代词，补充"ones"使句子完整。

× No, I think there are many reasons why some product is very expensive, for example, the the taxation and import fee.

✓ No, I think there are many reasons why some products are very expensive, for example, the taxation and import fees.

"product"应使用复数形式"products"，因为指多个商品；动词"is"应改为复数形式"are"以与复数主语一致；"import fee"应改为复数"import fees"，表示多项费用。

× No, I think there are many reasons why some product is very expensive, for example, the the taxation and import fee.

✓ No, I think there are many reasons why some products are very expensive, for example, the taxation and import fees.

主语"some products"为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"，而不是单数"is"。

× So for example, some some foreign products, which is really expensive, but sometimes it's not very, it's not better than local products.

✓ So for example, some foreign products, which are really expensive, but sometimes they're not better than local products.

"products"为复数，关系代词"which"指代复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"；"it's"应改为复数形式"they're"以与复数主语一致。