购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Avoid vague phrases like "funny happy" and instead express feelings clearly. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I like shopping because it's enjoyable to discover new items and try them out. I also like going with friends and family, which makes the experience more fun and memorable.

建議: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a clear reason with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: No, I don't usually compare prices because I already know which products I want, so I save time by buying them directly.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be more specific and avoid unclear phrases like "what I want to be for go" and "I stock at least."

範例: No, it's not difficult for me to choose soap because I already know what I want. I usually buy the Garden brand since I trust its quality, so I don't need to spend much time deciding.

建議: Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Provide a clear opinion with supporting reasons using linking words for coherence.

範例: I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes cheaper products have the same quality. Often, we pay more just for the brand name.

× Yes I like shopping because it's fun to find new thing and try.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find new things and try them.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'try' needs an object, so 'try them' is appropriate.

× It make me feel like funny happy.

✓ It makes me feel funny and happy.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'like funny happy' is incorrect; it should be 'funny and happy' to properly describe feelings.

× I no I didn't compare price because I don't have a time to compare price because I know already.

✓ No, I didn't compare prices because I don't have time to compare prices since I already know.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and article usage. 'I no' should be 'No'. 'Price' should be plural 'prices' as it refers to multiple items. 'A time' should be 'time' without an article. 'Because I know already' is better expressed as 'since I already know' for clarity.

× No, it's not difficult for me to make choice with soap because I already know what I want, what I want to be for go and I stock at least I trust garden brand so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

✓ No, it's not difficult for me to make choices with soap because I already know what I want, what I want to buy, and I stock at least. I trust the Garden brand, so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

'Make choice' should be 'make choices' to indicate plural. 'What I want to be for go' is unclear and corrected to 'what I want to buy'. 'I stock at least' is ambiguous but kept as is. 'Garden brand' should have the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific brand.

× I don't think expensive product always better because sometimes the product are cheaper and we are just paying for the brand.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes the products are cheaper and we are just paying for the brand.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match the context. Also, 'product are' should be 'products are' for subject-verb agreement.