购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details to make your response more effective.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because I love exploring new styles and adding variety to my wardrobe.

建議: Avoid filler phrases like 'Well, actually that sound quite interesting question.' Start directly with your answer. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your reasons. Also, improve grammar and sentence clarity.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices online and in stores because I want to make sure I get the best deal and avoid being overcharged.

建議: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and articles. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, make your answer more natural and concise.

範例: No, it's not difficult because I usually shop with my family or friends, and they give me good advice which helps me choose clothes easily.

建議: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use specific examples or reasons to support your opinion. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I believe expensive products are usually better because they often have higher quality materials, better craftsmanship, and come from reputable brands.

× I really enjoy, I really love the shopping because I love to enjoy new variety clothes and my wardrobe.

✓ I really enjoy, I really love shopping because I love to enjoy a new variety of clothes and my wardrobe.

The phrase 'new variety clothes' is incorrect; it should be 'a new variety of clothes' to properly quantify and describe the noun 'clothes'. Also, 'the shopping' is unnecessary; 'shopping' without 'the' is correct here.

× Yes, I compare prices when I shop something, I compare that the online process and because I'm not sure that they are telling me a correct price or not.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop for something; I compare the online prices because I'm not sure if they are telling me the correct price or not.

The phrase 'shop something' should be 'shop for something' to use the correct preposition. 'Compare that the online process' is incorrect; it should be 'compare the online prices'. Also, 'a correct price' should be 'the correct price' to specify the price in question.

× No, actually it's not because I usually go for shopping with my family or with my friends, so they give me a good advice.

✓ No, actually it's not because I usually go shopping with my family or my friends, so they give me good advice.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'a good advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is uncountable; it should be 'good advice' without an article.

× They help me to choosing the clothes so I don't get any difficulty.

✓ They help me choose the clothes so I don't have any difficulty.

After 'help me', the base form of the verb 'choose' should be used, not the gerund 'choosing'. Also, 'get any difficulty' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have any difficulty'.

× Definitely yes. Expensive products are very much better than cheaper ones because their quality is much better, the cloth is much better and the quality The thing is much better than the cheaper ones and the brand is also good.

✓ Definitely yes. Expensive products are much better than cheaper ones because their quality is better, the cloth is better, and the overall thing is much better than the cheaper ones, and the brand is also good.

The phrase 'very much better' is awkward; 'much better' is more natural. Repetition of 'quality' is redundant; 'overall thing' or 'product' is clearer. Also, 'the cloth' should be 'the cloth' or 'the fabric' depending on context, but 'cloth' is acceptable here.