购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và lặp lại, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh". Ngoài ra, hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to choose from a variety of products. For example, I often buy fresh fruits and affordable clothes, which makes shopping both enjoyable and practical.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời có tính liên kết. Hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn so sánh giá cả khi mua sắm.

範例: Yes, I usually compare prices because some grocery items can be expensive, while others like clothes or pencils are more affordable. This helps me find the best deals and save money.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh". Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sự khó khăn khi lựa chọn sản phẩm.

範例: Yes, it is sometimes difficult to make choices because stores have many products. I need to spend extra time selecting the best items for my family to ensure quality and value.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa quan điểm của mình.

範例: I believe expensive products are usually better because they often have higher quality and more ingredients. For example, a high-quality chip brand may cost more but tastes better and contains healthier ingredients than cheaper ones.

× I really like shopping because uh, shopping has uh, many more time to choose the better product and I can buy more food, clothes, all the, uh, beautiful fruit beside the product here are cheap and affordable.

✓ I really like shopping because, uh, shopping gives me much more time to choose better products and I can buy more food, clothes, and all the beautiful fruits here, which are cheap and affordable.

The phrase 'many more time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'much' instead of 'many'. Also, 'the better product' should be plural 'better products' to match the context. 'Fruit' should be plural 'fruits' when referring to different kinds. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I think that the prices when I shop in the grocery store is uh, sometime expensive in uh, some product, but it uh, also very cheap and affordable for near other products such as the clothes or pencil.

✓ I think that the prices when I shop in the grocery store are sometimes expensive for some products, but they are also very cheap and affordable compared to other products such as clothes or pencils.

The subject 'prices' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Some product' should be plural 'some products'. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'prices'. 'Near other products' is incorrect; 'compared to other products' is appropriate. 'The clothes or pencil' should be 'clothes or pencils' without 'the'.

× I think that it is quite difficult for me to make choice when you shop because the shop have many product when I am must to uh, choose the better product for my family, so I have uh, spend more time to choose the product to buy.

✓ I think that it is quite difficult for me to make choices when I shop because the shop has many products and I must choose the better products for my family, so I have to spend more time choosing the products to buy.

'Make choice' should be plural 'make choices'. 'You shop' should be 'I shop' to maintain consistency. 'The shop have' should be 'the shop has' (subject-verb agreement). 'Many product' should be 'many products'. 'I am must to' is incorrect; 'I must' is correct. 'Choose the better product' should be plural 'choose the better products'. 'I have spend' should be 'I have to spend'. 'To choose the product to buy' is better as 'choosing the products to buy' for fluency.

× I think that the expensive product is a quite better than the cheaper ones because the expensive product is a the quality and have more any ingredient in product. A better chips is also had cheaper and had less.

✓ I think that expensive products are quite better than cheaper ones because expensive products have better quality and more ingredients. Better chips are also cheaper and have fewer ingredients.

'The expensive product is a quite better' is incorrect; it should be 'expensive products are quite better' (plural and correct article usage). 'Is a the quality' is incorrect; it should be 'have better quality'. 'Have more any ingredient' is incorrect; it should be 'have more ingredients'. 'A better chips is also had cheaper and had less' is incorrect; it should be 'Better chips are also cheaper and have fewer ingredients'. 'Fewer' is used with countable nouns like 'ingredients'.