购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I have free time or after achieving good grades at school. I usually go shopping with my friends or family, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Focus on giving a clear, structured response with linking words to explain your reasons. Use appropriate vocabulary and avoid filler sounds.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices because I am a student and have limited money. Therefore, I check both the price and quality of clothes or food before buying to make sure I get the best value.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure.

範例: No, I find it quite easy to make choices when I shop. Usually, I quickly decide what to buy because I know what I need and prefer simple options.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid hesitation sounds.

範例: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper items can have good quality, while expensive products might not always justify their price.

× Actually I prefer shopping when I have free times or I achieve high score at school, I will shopping with my friends or family.

✓ Actually, I prefer shopping when I have free time or I achieve a high score at school; I will go shopping with my friends or family.

The word 'times' should be singular 'time' because 'free time' is an uncountable noun. 'High score' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'I will shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'I will go shopping' to use the correct verb form.

× The Feliz I am a student so I have a less monies to uh umm shop with our don't see is the price so I usually compare price and the qualities of the of clothes is or food to buy.

✓ The fact is I am a student, so I have less money to shop with. I don't care about the price, so I usually compare the price and the quality of clothes or food before buying.

'A less monies' is incorrect; 'money' is uncountable and should be used without 'a' and 'less' is correct without 'a'. 'Price' should be singular when referring generally, and 'qualities' should be 'quality' as an uncountable noun here. The sentence structure was also unclear and has been corrected for clarity.

× I didn't know I am a person who quite easy to make choices.

✓ I don't know; I am a person who is quite easy to make choices.

The use of 'didn't know' (past tense) conflicts with the present tense 'I am'. The correct tense here is present simple 'don't know' to match the context. Also, 'quite easy' needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct.

× When I shop, I can easy to pick some things.

✓ When I shop, I can easily pick some things.

'Easy' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'pick'. The correct adverb form is 'easily'.

× Actually is uh, if it's a expensive product, it will good then cheaper ones because umm, a cheap, uh, or expensive product is umm, are made by important things and uh, next.

✓ Actually, if it's an expensive product, it will be better than cheaper ones because a cheap or expensive product is made with important materials, and so on.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an' ('an expensive product'). 'It will good' is missing the verb 'be' and should be 'it will be better'. 'Better' is the comparative form needed here. 'Are made by important things' is incorrect; it should be 'is made with important materials' for clarity and correctness.