购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and filler words like 'uh'. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, avoiding redundancy, and using correct grammar. Also, avoid hesitation sounds to improve fluency.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping because I find it therapeutic and a good way to relax after a busy day. Additionally, it allows me to check out new food products in the market. However, I usually try not to buy too many things each time I go shopping.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases and some grammatical mistakes, which affect clarity. Avoid confusing expressions and focus on clear, direct responses. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons for comparing prices.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to make sure I get good value for money. By comparing different brands, I can save money and buy quality products for my family.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'in half mile of something' and 'never give or taste before in order'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: No, it's not difficult for us to make choices because we are easygoing. We treat shopping like a fun outing and often try new products that we haven't tried before.

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are minor errors such as 'budgets smartphones' and 'really remium models'. Pay attention to pronunciation and word choice to improve accuracy. Also, try to use linking words to enhance coherence.

範例: Not necessarily. Although expensive products usually have better materials and technology, cheaper ones can offer similar features. For instance, some budget smartphones perform almost as well as premium models, making them a good option for many people.

× Guess a little bit, I find shopping a really therapeutic and have a way to kick back and unwind after a long hectic period.

✓ I guess a little bit, I find shopping really therapeutic and a way to kick back and unwind after a long hectic period.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Guess' as an imperative or standalone verb without a subject. Adding 'I' before 'guess' makes it a proper subject-verb structure. Also, 'a really therapeutic' is incorrect because 'therapeutic' is an adjective and needs a noun; removing 'a' corrects this.

× Moreover, it can help me to examine my the foods in uh, product market.

✓ Moreover, it can help me to examine the foods in the product market.

The phrase 'my the foods' is incorrect because 'my' and 'the' cannot be used together before a noun. Also, 'product market' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the market being referred to.

× But I usually hold up hold back myself to not buy too much goods for every time I go shopping.

✓ But I usually hold myself back from buying too many goods every time I go shopping.

The phrase 'hold up hold back myself' is redundant and incorrect; 'hold myself back' is correct. Also, 'to not buy too much goods' is incorrect because 'goods' is plural and requires 'too many' instead of 'too much'. The preposition 'from' is needed after 'hold myself back'.

× I consider myself no more than a tie but a Thai concert person, so whenever I have a chance to shop for my family on my own, I usually compare the prices between brands in order to make sure they worth every penny and I can put aside as much money as possible.

✓ I consider myself not just a tie but a Thai concert person, so whenever I have a chance to shop for my family on my own, I usually compare the prices between brands to make sure they are worth every penny and I can save as much money as possible.

The phrase 'no more than a tie but a Thai concert person' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'not just a tie but a Thai concert person' makes more sense. 'Make sure they worth' is missing the verb 'are'. 'Put aside' is better replaced with 'save' in this context.

× To be honest, my family and I are really easy going so we consider every time shopping as a field trip rather than an intense and strategy hunt for the best quality goods.

✓ To be honest, my family and I are really easygoing, so we consider every shopping trip as a field trip rather than an intense and strategic hunt for the best quality goods.

The word 'easy going' should be 'easygoing' as one word. 'Every time shopping' is incorrect; 'every shopping trip' is correct. 'Strategy hunt' should be 'strategic hunt' because 'strategic' is the adjective form.

× So each time when we are in half mile of something, we would choose the new one.

✓ So each time when we are within half a mile of something, we choose the new one.

The phrase 'in half mile of something' is incorrect; it should be 'within half a mile of something'. Also, 'would choose' is better as 'choose' to match the habitual action.

× The things that we have never give or taste before in order.

✓ The things that we have never given or tasted before, in order.

The verbs 'give' and 'taste' need to be in the past participle form 'given' and 'tasted' after 'have'. The sentence is incomplete and awkward; adding a comma helps, but the phrase 'in order' is unclear and may need further context.

× For example, some budgets smartphones perform well as well as really remium models, making them a practical choice for many people.

✓ For example, some budget smartphones perform as well as really premium models, making them a practical choice for many people.

'Budgets smartphones' is incorrect; it should be 'budget smartphones' as 'budget' is an adjective here. 'Perform well as well as' is redundant; 'perform as well as' is correct. 'Remium' is a typo and should be 'premium'.