购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more precise and avoid confusing words like 'Joomla' which seems out of context. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and make it more natural by using simple and clear language.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially for cosmetics and earrings. Whenever I see a beautiful pair of earrings, I feel attracted and often buy them. I usually pay attention to small details when I shop to find unique items.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but the sentence structure can be improved for better flow. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to spend my money wisely. Moreover, I also check the quality of the products before making a decision, so I don't regret my purchase later.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repetition. Also, explain your preference with a linking word to make your answer coherent.

範例: Not really, I find it easy to make choices when shopping. Since I prefer dresses that suit my colour, I usually pick clothes in those shades. Therefore, shopping is not confusing for me.

建議: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary to express your ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: I don't believe expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. It is important to check the quality and read customer reviews before buying. Therefore, I usually choose products that are affordable but have good quality.

× I like to shop more about the cosmetic items and usually I like earrings a lot.

✓ I like to shop more for cosmetic items and usually I like earrings a lot.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express preference or interest in items is 'for'. So, 'shop for cosmetic items' is the correct phrase.

× So whenever I find a Joomla I will get really mesmerized by it and I end up even buying that.

✓ So whenever I find a jhumka I get really mesmerized by it and I end up even buying it.

The word 'Joomla' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'jhumka' (earring). Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'it' to correctly refer to the previously mentioned item.

× So whenever I go shopping I usually look up onto the small.

✓ So whenever I go shopping I usually look at the small items.

The phrase 'look up onto the small' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate focus or attention. Also, 'small' should be followed by a noun like 'items' to complete the phrase.

× I'm a person who compares prices whenever I go to shopping because I like to spend my money more judiciously rather than wasting it unnecessarily.

✓ I'm a person who compares prices whenever I go shopping because I like to spend my money more judiciously rather than wasting it unnecessarily.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'.

× So what according to me is best? I chose it so I will not have a regret later.

✓ So what, according to me, is best? I choose it so I will not have any regrets later.

The verb tense 'chose' (past tense) is incorrect here; it should be 'choose' (present tense) to match the context. Also, 'a regret' should be 'any regrets' for natural expression.

× Not really, I'm a person who is more conserved.

✓ Not really, I'm a person who is more conservative.

The word 'conserved' is incorrect here. The correct adjective to describe someone cautious or reserved is 'conservative'.

× I think I just prefer to shop a dress which usually suits my colour.

✓ I think I just prefer to shop for a dress which usually suits my colour.

The verb 'shop' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by the object of shopping. So, 'shop for a dress' is correct.

× So I usually prefer to buy a product who is at an affordable place rather than quality.

✓ So I usually prefer to buy a product that is at an affordable price rather than focusing on quality.

The relative pronoun 'who' is used for people, not things. For products, 'that' is correct. Also, 'place' is incorrect; the correct word is 'price'. The sentence is clarified for better meaning.